IvanDude's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The man without a life]

Good but could use fine tuning.

The graphic's and story line were very good. I half expected you to play the classic "Puff the magic dragon" but what you did was just as good. The end result was random. I expected him to jump anyway. The music was good. What I would change would be the introduction of the characters. Describe why the man is so sad maybe? Express the interloper possibly with "far out" color scheme. He seemed to Joe Shmoe to give advice on anything. Make him look like a complete stoner would work. Keep up the good work.

[A Very "Damon!" Christmas]

work on your character design

Your story was very entertaining, a blend of the napoleon dynamite attitude with some Christmas. But on the down side you need to work on your character design. It resembles a stick figure except with squares. There is no form. Also the story gets prejudice at times.

[Zoom Out]

Not a good Flash Idea

Flash has limitations, one of which is doing something like this. We have expectations when we think of our universe. If you look at the pics at NASA you get your mind blown at how little you really are. Flash cannot capture the awe that those pictures can. Flash is to set in stone. Unable to blend colors easily. (It can only do base colors) and that is with the latest version. Learn your limitations and find something new.

OxSox responds:

You know what I totally respect and to some extent even agree with you. I looked at many NASA pictures while I was working on this (and at other times) and I agree that this does have the same effect. I tried to balance the entertainment value with the ability to show this size differential, and I totally respect you for thinking that I went to far toward entertainment. But on the other hand I do not regret pushing th limits of flash even if your right and I failed. I think pushing the limits of flash is one the great aspects of new grounds. Regardless, I hope that in the future I make a flash you like better and I really appreciate your review.

[Letters]

Innovative

Very creative, work on your material and you won’t need good graphic ability to succeed.

[Where can I stab...]

Truely Impressed

If this is indeed your first flash movie then you have a shot at doing this for awhile. I would work on the graphic that has a hole stretching through several buildings. The quote at the beginning is in my opinion a true prediction coming from a professional. For a first flash I am impressed and please keep on posting

Freelanced responds:

yes, it is my first real flash movie

all my other ones were never finished past the intro

they were quite sad

haha

thanks for the encouragement.

its funny you put a "5" for humor

i didnt find my movie that funny but that does make me laugh, XD

[life of a french model]

Potential but needs help

Who comes up with your material? Because he needs some mental help if he thinks that pilotless stories with no real idea behind it save it is the expression of a theme that to most of the viewers is not even looked upon. Interesting graphics. I would put them to use writing a jack skeleton parody.

[a window]

Very Good

The reason Newgrounds exists is for people to display quality flash work. It would seem that you are an untapped talent. Even though this is a loop, it is an exception due to its ability to display emotion. I would suggest taking your work to the next level and make an actual movie. Lastly thank you for posting this wonderful piece of work to express your desired mood.

[GAY MOVIE]

Orange Beef?

I fail to see the plot development of a story centered around a food fruit/meat hybrid. Were you hungry when you came up with the idea? It would seem you need to get your creativity checked.

Doctor-Gordon responds:

lol your review make me laugh XD
ORANGEBEEF IS THE BEST !!!1YOU CANNOT KILL ORANGE BEEF!